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Behind Closed Doors

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Fraternal mismatched Georgian twin doors kissed.

Even the facades on the adjoining terraced houses differed as sharply as political factions. Sarah was intrigued, and wondered if the neighbours were at odds.

Her imagination ran away with her, dragging her headlong into wild speculation about a potential chalk-and-cheese relationship between a staid civil servant and a quirky marketing executive. Surely the brighter door, with its bright red brickwork, closed upon the home of one successfully steeped in the arts, making good money.

Meanwhile, the black door's contrast with its white arched surround set into time-bleached bricks spoke to her of a steady income, drab predictability, and a dull but useful life. Did they know each other? Did they speak to each other? Or did they briefly pass each other by, barely paying attention to each other? Of course, these days, she couldn't make assumptions. The golden-hued door might close on a rainbow family; two mums. Two dads. A thruple? A child adopted from an impoverished nation? The possibilities were endless. Sarah really wanted to go inside to see if she was right.

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Two different doors sharing parallel lives. (6)

Two single mums struggling to leave the house. Sometimes it is a tie, and they share an exhausted smile. (19)

Often, one will be ready first, baby peeking out from a packed pram. They will pause, glancing at the other door, hoping everything is ok. (25)

Rarely, time will slow, and they can chat. About their kids, work, kids, home and kids. About everything and nothing. And that moment will fill their cups and make the hard days a little bit easier. Then, it is back to rushing out the door and sharing another exhausted smile. (50)

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